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March 23, 2004The NeoShark Origin Story... Kinda...So, I was sitting in the warehouse(hmm... that sounds odd) and I was thinking about stuff... I started thinking about a girl, and then I thought a little about things I put online and stuff,and I thought about how I had, awhile back, written a little bit of stuff about the charater NeoShark... And I was thinking about how I should write/rewrite all the stories, since they had a nice big, fun, acton-based storyline... but then I got to thinking that I don't really want anybody reading those things... they seem very... childish... Uhh... NeoShark is a pretty childish name in the first place, not to mention that the first story describes his genetics as being a cross between a legendary being from an extinct pseudo-god race from another existance and dimension... the other main portion of the genetics is from that pseudo-god's pet Pokemon, which was actually a fictional pokemon I had developed.... oh, and the original creation (I think I named that one Neo) was a failure, and died within hours of cloning(combining the pseudo-god and the pokemons genetics) in the still-afloat laboratory of Atlantis. It is not really a city, it was just a really good scientists laboratory-city... lots of people lived there, and he was in charge, but... yeah... So then the scientist decided to add in some patch-genetics(remember Jurrasic Park?) from sharks.... since... sharks were... nearby...? But yeah, so then he had created the being he called NeoShark, meaning "the shark that comes after' or something like that.... But after it grew to maturity, being a demi-pseudo-god, it was powerfull enough to kill everything it Atlantis, and sink the entire lab to the bottom of the ocean(well, it was in the mediterranian, but it drifted off somehow into the ocean or something... thats unexplained... I can do that... yaknow... say its unexplained...) But, yeah, so, the shark genetics had the instincts to kill, so when NeoShark matured, he broke out of his maturing tank, and killed everyone, then after a long time, he eventually learned to use the machines and things in the lab, and discovered some special inter-existance travel. uhh... thats complicated... basically, an existance is a collection of demensions. you can travel to and from different demensions with inter-demensional travel, but you have to have different tech for inter-existance, so... if you are in EXistance X, Demension 1(EXx;D1) and want to go to EXistance y, Demension 1(EXy;D1) you would have to have the inter-existance technology, but if you just wanted to go from EXx;D1 to EXx;D2 you would only need inter-demensional travel. Got it? Didn't think so... But the inter-existance travel NeoShark discovered was one-way and accidental, in fact, at that time, he was merely trying to develop inter-demensional travel, so... yeah. He then got shot off to another existance and dimension, which is completely different, and he did a bunch of stuff there, but thats something else.
Okay, so, there are the storys, and I guess I have figured out how to establish it with a very similar origin story, but quite different... like, yeah... But, I guess I can do it... I just need to plot out a timeline of the whole, like... long long time NeoShark lives(couple thousand years being a demi-pseudo-god and all) and maybee if I have time, work out a bit of his anscesters timelines(oh, right... that pokemon... will just be his pet, not a pokemon!!! stupid eleven year old...(<-reference to me) ) or something... But, yeah... eventually I might write out these storys... and definetly not in order... Yeah... I think I have a clue what order I will do them in... hmmm... Yeah...but anyway. Thats the plan.... Time for me to work on a timelene.... but... I guess I should do homework first, eh? Posted by Warpshadow at March 23, 2004 06:01 PM | TrackBack |
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Yes, its true that sharks have an instinct to kill, but not all sharks...keep that in mind. Posted by: Mr. Jupiter on May 9, 2004 06:45 AM |
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